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PostSubject: .   Mon Mar 01, 2010 6:27 am

Wonder what pokemon is next..............
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PostSubject: Re: Dede's story corner   Thu Mar 04, 2010 4:52 am

Milly gave a huge yawn after a huge meal. "Well, i think its time to go to sleep," said Milly, as she looked at her pokeball with sentret in it. "You should let it out of its ball," said Lin, without even looking up. "Ya i should, come on out sentret!" Milly yelled, how did he know i was looking at my pokeball? milly wondered. sentret was out of its ball and was looking around. "Chikorita you come out too!" yelled Milly throwing her ball. "Chicka, chicka," Chikorita squeked. "Sen, sentret!" Sentret squecked with alramed and ran behind a rock. "Whats wrong with sentret Lin?" asked Milly. "It probably is afraid chickorita will hurt it again," said Lin. "Oh no, how is it supposed to battle when its so scared of getting hurt?" Milly asked in alarm. "It most likly will go away with time and training," anwsered Lin. "Well thats good time for bed i guess, come on guys," said milly, as she climed into her tent chikorita followed her with no problem but sentret wouldn't move. "Sentret come on," said Milly, but sentret was too scared. "Ok then return sentret," said milly returning sentret to its ball. "Good night Lin," said Milly yawning. "Good night," said Lin climing into his sleeping bag. They went to sleep. but in the morning Lin woke up with a start. "Whoa!" said a startled Lin. A poliwag was standing on his chest. "Uh... hi there little guy," said Lin. it stared at hiim. "Hey Lin you up yet?" asked Milly climbing out of her tent. "AHHHHHH!!!!" she screamed. "Whats wrong Milly?" asked Lin. "A-A water type!" she screamed. "whats wrong with that?" he asked. "I HATE WATER TYPES EEEK!" screamed Milly. poliewag got scared and ran behind Lin. "What? how can somthing so cute be so scary?" asked Lin. "It just is!" said Milly.

Well Milly is terified wat will happen next? stay tuned
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PostSubject: Re: Dede's story corner   Thu Mar 04, 2010 5:11 am

Oh dear, poor Milly!
Focus on capitalization a little more. A few of your "I"s are missing capitals. Otherwise, it's a perfect, fresh trainer story!
Waiting for the next part! Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Dede's story corner   Thu Mar 04, 2010 5:17 am

lol azure i wait wait i mean I do have a problem with that thanks
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PostSubject: Re: Dede's story corner   Thu Mar 11, 2010 4:29 pm

"Well, no matter it's going into my pokeball now, so you won't have to worry about it," Lin teased. "Your gonna catch that thing?" yelled Milly. "Of course it's nice pokemon, and it seems to like me," said Lin. "Well, fine then do wat you want i'm going far away from that thing for now cya," said Milly. "Okay fine what ever ya want," said Lin still staring at the poliwag. "cyndaquil go!" yelled Lin reveling his new pokemon. "Use tackle!" he comanded. bam a direct hit poliwag was down. "Uhh... that was fast," he whispered to himself. "Go pokeball," yelled Lin. It wobbled once twice its his! "Yes i caught it!" yelled Lin in delight. Milly walked up just then and said, "Ugh you really caught that dreadful thing?" "Yup, i did it's a good pokemon!" said Lin proudly. "Ok, what ever lets eat," said Milly. "Okay, what are we having?" he asked. "Uhm... let's see here, oh i know lets eat peacha berrys for breakfast, its sweet and healthy," anwsered Milly. Lin laughed and said, "Okay but don't be surprised if i eat them all!" he said and they walked off laughing.
yay for lin he has a new pokemon! come back next time!
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PostSubject: wow   Fri Mar 12, 2010 6:13 am

OMG a poliwag broke in through the tent
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